Good one! My comment would be to look at how her hair buns would work without the covers ie how does the braids coil around into that shape. I can appreciate the fact that you probably haven't drawn her hair in the Alpha style before and you gave it a go. Also, the ribbons could be a bit more 'flowing' if that's the right word? You've done it before in the other Chun Li pics and I think the same would apply here even though her ribbons aren't as thick as her standard white ones. It's just a bit rigid here because of the angles and how the bows look the same and symmetrical to each other. Lastly, the front on face is particularly hard to draw because of the symmetry. I reckon you did a pretty good job balancing both sides (the flip trick is particularly useful here), it's only the bridge of the nose that seems an issue - try to not curve it too much because that suggests that her nose curves back into her face quite a bit. Other than that, you did well so I hope that helps!
Thanks! I intended to make her buns larger than normal here and add layers with the braids, since I wanted to try interpreting them through a different style. I guess I thought the ribbons would hang more still since she's not moving here, but the flow of ribbons could probably add another dimension. Noted about the nose- I have been trying to establish how I want to draw noses but I guess I'm still having trouble with frontal views
Sorry if this is a weird question, but do you think my style is pretty? It's just in all the feedback you've given me I don't think you've mentioned the characters looking attractive (though it's possible I just can't remember) so I wasn't sure what you thought of it on an aesthetic level...
yeah! I thought you were going for a similar look to the animated movie because you found it appealing that way so I didn't think I needed to state the obvious XD
With things like ribbons and hair, they tend to move and fall about in a random way so it's best to give them an irregular/non uniform look so that it'll look more natural As with the nose, just keep looking at as many refs of how it's done frontal view so you get an idea - of course it varies style to style but it'll give you a hint all the same.
I am haha... I guess I just wanted to ask for clarification in that department
Yeah I see what you mean about the ribbons. I should just style some in my hair and look in a mirror for real life effects, lol.
With the nose, I tried making it a bit bigger, since I don't know if you remember but in my other Chun-Li drawing of her in her SSFIV alt you said the nose could be a little bigger... but I guess I didn't really know in what way to make it bigger per se
yeah modeling yourself in the mirror is one of the best references you can get XD
I understand - it's just with the anime style it's kinda hard to show that unless you go into more details, but then you'd lose the anime look. From what I've seen, front on faces in that style don't really show nostrils but rely more on the position of the nose tip - the line of the nose is almost all straight and only goes out to a point at a slight angle to express the tip. You can adjust the size of the nose by how far vertically, and horizontally you emphasize that tip. It's a very subtle feature already as it is and it's simplified 100x more in anime style so it's just a matter of practice to get a feel for how you'd like to draw it